Healthy Living

This is everything you would want in a healthy living leaflet!  Jack has a catchy headline on the front cover, and has used sub-headings for the different sections.  The sentences are clear and the illustrations help to explain the advice.  This is brilliant, Jack!

Perfect presentation

Not only have Charlie and George written stunning descriptions of a cold and frosty winter morning, they have been working really hard to improve their handwriting.  What a difference their efforts have made!  Regular size and beautiful joining - a real pleasure to read!

PE Superstar!

Brandon has been working really hard in his PE lessons.  When he has found something tricky, he has tried and tried until he has got it right, and he has worked really well with other children.  Well done you!

It's the wolf!

Ruby and Frankie have been learning all about wolves and have written down some of the facts they can remember.  We are very impressed by their spelling of the words they wanted to write - great listening and great learning!

Dear Diary ...

My goodness, there is some high quality writing here!  Sam, Zach and Annie have used really mature vocabulary and phrases and powerful writing techniques to engage the reader in their Egytian diary entries.  This is stunning work!

Scary story!

Jacob has listened so carefully for all the sounds he wanted to write, you can read every word in his story.  It is quite a sad story for the polar bear cubs, but at least his amazing whale shark gets his dinner!  Super writing, Jacob!

Walking in the air

Miss Leftley is very pleased with the stories these folks have written.  Amelia, Teddy, Charlee, Holly and Aoife have used some really mature and clever words and phrases to make their writing interesting to read, and their stories are full of adventure.  Super effort!

Poor old Santa

What an amazing story Leo has written.  He has impressed us all by the number of adjectives and adverbs he has managed to pack into his writing - and he has even included a simile and a metaphor.  This is superb work, Leo - well done!